Monday 22 September 2014

Narratives about the jungle or space

We have been writing narratives. We could choose space theme or jungle theme. Here are some of our favourite parts of our stories. Please have a read and leave us a positive comment!

One hot, hot day there were these two boys called Sam and Josh. They were really bored so Josh had a plan. He wanted to see what space looked like, Josh asked Sam if he wanted to go to space.
Written by C.H

"Wow that wind is hard." "Sorry about that, "who said that?" "me" "whose me?" "I am me" "so your name is me" "no silly I am a tiger and my name is Chucky" "Whaaat a tiger, please don't eat my body." "I won't silly I am a friendly tiger, get it beacuse this jungle is called Friendly Jungle."
Written by Z.D

They had wonderful greetings from their friends and family. When they found they were home....
Written by L.G

Iggy and Chucky were wiggling in the rocket ship.
Written by A.G

They both shrieked and ran for a space creator. They ran in the creator not knowing there was a secret space station.
Written by S.D

Oh nooo...nooo I'm beedin, where's a plaster, found them, now where am I...Oh no! I'm looooost!
Written by T.T

Fire aboard, Fire extinguisher! Shh...shhh...shhh "Stop that fire thing" "Phew."
Written by A.L

Oh no, we have ran out of petrol. "I know what to do, open the tank." "That was a nasty burp." "Hey the rockets running to earth."
Written by M.G

"Ahh they are aleins run for your life."
"Calm down we won't hurt you this is giggles and Sherbet and I'm Bubbles."
"They even speak, go go to the rocket"
"No Dad I want to see them and play"
"Fine but don't let them hurt us"
Later on they did some moon crater boarding and Sherbet crashed into the fuel tank and broke the rocket. They did not know what to do but 2 hours later another rocket came and took them home.
Written by E.S

Iggy ran under the couch and was hidden. Sly - one grabbed the Mum, Dad and sister. "I shall take you as prisoners!" shouted sly-one. Iggy watched in horror as his Mum, Dad and sister were taken away from him.
Written by E.K

"Knock, knock"
"Seriously bubbles, I have had enough of your jokes"
Written by E.C

This is a tale from a far distant planet set in the times long before the green aliens.

Ahh...What is that? "Hi I am Sherbet, Sherbet the alien" " oh that makes much more sense" "it totally does" "well your really cute" "thank you" "I am only 3 years old so yea" "well I think I will take you home." So off to home they went.
Written by K.K

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