Monday 12 May 2014

Moment in Time...

Read some of the amazing stories written by students in Room 23!

'The Incredible Movie Time'
By Z.D

Kapow! The movie starts, I can hear bird tweeting. Suddenly a blue Macaw show up. When i eat my ice-cream I can taste the wonderful taste of banana. When I ate my popcorn everytime I put it in my mouth my teeth crunched the popcorn into little tiny bits of popcorn and I could taste the wonderful molecules that are in the popcorn.


'The Candy Man'
By E.S

I walked into the hall...mmmm...the smell of lolly pops squeezed tightly through my nostrils. It felt like I was surrounded by rainbow lollipops. The candy man flipped and rolled the boiling hot lollipop mixture on a heavy, rock hard metal table. He flavoured and coloured it and gave us a bit to shape into magical shapes. We had to 2 of each flavour. The flavours were strawberry and watermelon.


'Bay Wave'
By E.K

Splash!! Splosh!! Splish!! Kids were skimming about all over the pool like a dog that has just discovered that the whole world is made of doggy treats. I started to runto the pool, I jumped in. I was soaring under the water like a penguin who is trying to catch a fish. Suddenly I crossed against the back of the pool. The waves were starting up...CRASH!! I bumped against the back of the poolagain. I hit it a few more times. Then I was underwater, I could not breath. I swam to the surface but the waves were crashing against me. I ran out of the pool like a person who had just found out that there was a shark in the swimming pool. But it is all over now, I'm so glad of that.

21 comments:

  1. Excellent stories.SJ room22

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  2. Cool story`s i love them!!!! THE BEST EVER !!!
    E.K

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  3. To Z.D,ES and E.K did very, very well in there writing recounts.Well done guys!! CW

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  4. Love the amazing writing!! H.W

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  5. You know what Z.D's story is about, because he said I can hear birds tweeting. S.D room23.

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  6. I realy like some words you used.Ns rm21

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  7. I love all of your stories. TW RM21

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  8. nice stories room 23 LN room 17

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  9. What about me M.R

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  10. Great stories fun to read LA rm21

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  11. I like how you explained how the movie started.CN Rm17

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  12. I really like E.S and E.K story's K.K

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  13. Super duper good stories RM 23. TT room 23

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  14. Some really fantastic stories!!! MR

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  15. I can not choose which one I like best. SD rm 23

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  16. your work is pro!!!!!!!!!!!! LG

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  17. incredibly awesome work!!!!!!! LG

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  18. some people used descritive words E.S

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  19. I really like Bay wave by EK! LG

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  20. great writing everyone! LG

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  21. Incredible peices of writing! LG

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